One day the cat walked in the park.Then he found a man who was chasing him. The man got the cat and went to the shop and he put a suit on the cat and this gave it super powers.
The cat got his superpowers and it was lazers,strong,fire,wind.The cat went to Glen Innes School to help the children but there was one bad guy there and the cat tried to destroy him with his windy powers. The bad guy could not die from the cat so they went underground so the children didn't’ get hurt.The cat and the bad guy went to the park to fight there.
The cat used his fire power to burn him but then the bad guy used his punch. The cat did not feel anything so the cat flew up and he had lasers that shoot out of his eyes. The bad guy got hurt but he tried to get up. The cat lifted him all the way to space and when he hit the moon he died.
Everyone at Glen Innes thanked the cat for saving the school and they all had free time to celebrate.
5 comments:
Hey Jamaine your improving more in your work and this writing is amazing. Keep up the good work.
Wow Jamaine, cool story. I really liked how you used the correct punctuation in the paragraphs.
cool man keep it up###
cool man keep it up###
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